Scrip
draft/ film ideas
Story plot over Vinnie and Tommy as
they where growing up.
Idea
#1
Tommy needs to use
the phone, walking over to some ladies he asked politely if he is able to use
one of their phones, saying yes they hand him the phone, making a quick call he
hangs up and starts talking to the women as they are distracted he quickly removes
the simcard and places the phone
back together with ought the people knowing, politely saying thank you she
walks of with a smile on
Idea #2
First extreme close up of vinnies clothing (shoes, buttons on the jacket) close up of the back of the head paned around
to he side of vinnies face.
Idea #3 Voice over (narrative) Cockney
accent
Well here is Vinnie a young man one well of a grafter
this man could sell sand to the Arabs, snow to the Eskimos. Clearly the brains
of the operation.
Not like Tommy he what you could call a bit of a wet
towel and complete and utterly useless, he may have his flaws but surprisingly
he is a smooth talker with the ladies and can win over any woman.
As this is going on shots of Tommy walking to meet
Vinnie, with a crosscut between both
characters. Vinnie walking around the corner.
Dialog
Tommy: Hello Vinnie
were we of to today
Vinnie: going to be making some money you better be on your
top game today
Tommy: I'm always on game mate a grafter, hard working as
they come.
Vinnie: don't make me laugh you dummy. You are just a cocky
flirt
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